After my first draft we went over ways to organize your paper in class and I realized a lot needed to be edited. I read my paper again and revised my thesis statement. At first my paper was based on a claim that was too broad and I lacked supporting points. In my first draft I based my paper off of changing to a French model, but in my second draft I decided to use the French model as a supporting detail and focus more on just changing lunches to be healthier. After doing this I re-organized my paper and put my information in sections and added more of my own opinion. I made sure to back up all of my claims with evidence and added more information where I thought was necessary, but I also removed some that was pointless. After doing this I found my paper to be stronger and more clear. After this, I added some more points that I had failed to include into my third draft, and had my final draft that I was proud of.